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Now as the sun rises,
I'm standing once again,
On these forgotten shores,
Last night I cried,
Lost in my tears,
Gripped by all,
My worldly fears.

Looking back,
Remembering when,
We were never afraid to dream,
Never afraid to lose,
And never afraid to be,
Who we wanted to be.

How we ran in fear,
And searched in vain,
But now our lives,
All to distant,
Are scattered over continents.
And our deeds,
All to clear,
Are blazoned across the skies.
Hero’s to the world.
Fallen angels.

We pray,
That our memories of today,
Will get us through tomorrow…

We did not exaggerate our injustice,
Nor feign our affection,
In a world so small,
We felt so far apart.

So I'll go,
And leave you standing,
In the pouring rain,
While walking away,
Trying to forget the pain.

And as the curtain falls,
We bow so gracefully,
Exiting left,
Always left,
Left behind…
©2006-2009 =tabzthefish
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Author's Comments

This poem incorporates many of my other poems, thats why its so long :P I have heavily edited this to achieve some sort of flow.

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:iconphantasy:
Bye hun!!

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Sorry, if you do not become less of a racist by comparing yourself to terrorists.
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WHERE YE BE GOING!?! :(

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A beautyful poem to say farewell Tabz...God be with you and may you always be happy and healthy. Goodbye my friend. :)

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:iconlanceyboi:
Farewell old friend, I shall always cherish the memories I have of you. See you on new years or something. :P

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The Grey Man

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:iconparslie:
AH!!! You're leaving!!!!!!! :(

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Sincerely,
Gloria :heart:
:iconshadow-hikari:
Please at least check in from time to time. Such a beatiful poem, so let's not say goodbye...Let's say see you, in case we may meet somewhere else in the future.

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"Yes, yes, and it's also stupid."-Me
"And so are you."-My friend

"Hapiness is achieved while chasing it." Kino Makoto
:icondrdukegonzo:
And one more add to my favourites.
Take care!
:iconfar-n-away:
I love the poem! So deep!
:icontabzthefish:
Thankyou very much! :hug:

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Thankyou so very much :hug: I'll still be acitve on the forums. :cuddle:

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